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Offline Fiona

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« on: March 23, 2007, 01:28:28 PM »
I'm not really good in English so usually try to explain everything by the easiest words, but sometimes I write some poetry. Using that amount of vocabulary I know (it's not really big).

Anyway, I wrote it to my boyfriend. A bit hard to read, but here is it:

My heart will love you till the day
When it should be stopped forever
And it will create that special way
Of our happiest life ever

These roads and fields, seas and another
They separated us for that far away
That we never can hold each other
And we can't make each other stay

I look through the window and see the moon
You look at the sky and the sun is up above
I know you wait for me to hear that "soon"
I know I'll never say to you "enough"

They look at us, at how strange we are
And how we drift like two dots in the ocean
But they'll never get how it is to be so far
And don't have any chance to get a motion

It seems to be we don't have anything at all
But fools those ones who think like this
I have so much and more inside my soul
That no one person can have and feels

The same old story and walls around me
And no one hears, and no one watches over
We don't have much strength to make it be
I'm not your girl and you are not my lover

But dark times will never make us sad
Like snow will never cover summer sand
Nothing can bring to us something bad
Cause this spark inside won't find the end

Offline Simon

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« Reply #1 on: March 23, 2007, 01:42:05 PM »
Very nice Fiona! Well done

Offline Fiona

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« Reply #2 on: March 23, 2007, 01:44:11 PM »
thanks Simon!

Offline jgsgtr

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« Reply #3 on: March 24, 2007, 05:50:37 AM »
awesome...especially the last three verses.

and one of my favorite lines has to be 'Like snow will never cover summer sand'.
Honey, I\'m just trying to make some sense outta me.

 

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