Author Topic: Brother Don't Bother  (Read 1277 times)

Offline Simon

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Brother Don't Bother
« on: October 13, 2006, 03:59:30 PM »
This Poetry i wrote for my brother along time ago. I decided to share it with you. If you have poetry you did and you wanna share with us please do so. I personnaly like poetry alot.

I want to take care of you,
And pray for you
and let you know that for you i'll be there
I want you to see the world with me
and later we can look back and see
The fun we had going everywhere.

Forgive me please, I tried my best
And those times i dissapointed you,
I was just like all the rest
But he just looked at me and caused a tear in my eye
By saying thanks, but don't even try.

He has green eyes
And a big heart so mild
But when he speaks you realise
He has the mind of a child.

His hands are soft and small
Which reminds me of someone who left us behind
But he just sits there and stares at the wall
Because where they keep him, they ignore him all the time.

I wish I could take him,
because he's my brother, my boy
but he just sits there and tells me
Brother, Dont bother cause here they use me as a toy.

I can feel his pain,
Running through me causing hate,
Because where they keep him,
It's in a horrible state.

He can be helped but I just don't know how
And everytime I think of it, I know that somehow
and someway, he'll be at rest
even if it has to be at his death
because I will stand tall and be brave
when they cover him smiling for once
but at his own grave.

Offline ImDez

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« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2006, 06:27:42 PM »
So sad and so beautiful.  Very nice, Simon, thanks for sharing it.
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« Reply #2 on: October 13, 2006, 06:41:44 PM »
You're good! Thanks for sharing.
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« Reply #3 on: October 14, 2006, 10:12:22 AM »
It sounds very sincere,i like it.Thanks Simon